Kunena Site Syndication http://www.abovetheswamp.com/ Mon, 06 Sep 2010 12:29:36 -0400 Kunena 1.5.4 http://www.abovetheswamp.com/components/com_kunena/template/default_ex/images/english/emoticons/rss.gif http://www.abovetheswamp.com/ Kunena Site Syndication http://www.abovetheswamp.com/swamp-talk/10-chit-chat/75-time-i-put-my-fingers-where-my-mouth-is#81 Thanks guys. I've done a second rewrite after having a friend edit for me, but I suspect a third going over would be uses to cross check a few elements, and as you said Jack, to make sure spell etc are all OK. The idea has progressed slightly, since my first posting. As I wrote the script with it being a pilot more or less. I thought I'd look at the next installment. I am now working on an outline for a 12ep season arc. Ep1 to Ep3 have one page summaries each, while the rest are collectively a one page overview, written in my own story short hand. Given I don't do this for a living, and have no deadline pressures to deal with, I thought I'd spend the rest of the year working on the scripts overall, and doing research into how best to present them to agents. In part the reason for doing this is to hone my writing skills somewhat before doing final rewrites. Thu, 02 Sep 2010 03:21:05 -0400 http://www.abovetheswamp.com/swamp-talk/21-life-love-health-happiness/71-chapter-9-the-nature-of-oppression#78 Hello again, Contiuum. Very wise and thank you for your valuable input. You must have a very intersting background. I thank you for your powerful thoughts and strategies. Speaking of forgiveness, please forgive me for taking so long to reply. Best, always Jack Donner Wed, 01 Sep 2010 18:03:14 -0400 http://www.abovetheswamp.com/swamp-talk/21-life-love-health-happiness/73-chapter-7-understanding-fear-and-phobias#77 Hello Continuum, forgive the long delay since your ost, I have been away a lot. Your thoughts and strategies are very useable, very clear, very workable, thoughtful and aware. Whe one finds a good listener, one should guide the listener to not interrup or offer opinions or interpretatons, wait for a a good moment of silence then ask if if s/he can offer a question. Non or bad listening is the common plague for almost all of us. Prohibition against listening is planted early in our lives by important ones not listeninhg, ridicule, threats etc. Thank you for your important posting, and stay well, Jack Donner Wed, 01 Sep 2010 17:57:17 -0400